childa innocha's exciting adventure [ARC 1]

299 - 300

posted 18th Apr 2021, 12:00 PM

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view reyamily's profile

18th Apr 2021, 12:00 PM

reyamily

yes, that's right! it's my poor attempt at a double spread page!!

and not only that, we've just hit 300 pages!
also 20 subs!!
a lot of stuff is happening!!!

thank you everybody for sticking around so far. i hope you continue to enjoy the story!
( also just in case this doesn't work here's an imgur link to the double spread: https://imgur.com/a/iuTK07f )

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view bonnh's profile

18th Apr 2021, 2:17 PM

bonnh

it looks grrrreat! and congrats on 300 pages! this was the comic that got me into making my own webcomics so thank you too!

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view reyamily's profile

18th Apr 2021, 5:53 PM

reyamily

im glad to be the one to get ya in on the comic stuff!
please keep up your drawing stuff too! and thank you!!!!!!!!

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view Squirreltastic-Blue's profile

19th Apr 2021, 11:45 PM

Squirreltastic-Blue

Double spread page!
Though, you have text in the no-fly zones for that.
I can tell you more about it if you're interested!

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view reyamily's profile

20th Apr 2021, 1:38 PM

reyamily

sure, why not? i'd love to hear more
(is it the sfx text in the middle? i was afraid that it'd look too empty since it's a not very detailed locale)

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view Squirreltastic-Blue's profile

20th Apr 2021, 2:56 PM

Squirreltastic-Blue

Here's a really basic example of safe zones and bleed areas.
The only problematic part of your page is the bottom middle panel, which would be sunk into the spine of the book, and a lot of it would be unreadable.
Your split talk bubble at the top is more what you'd wanna go with, albeit that should probably be even a little more spread out.
image

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view reyamily's profile

20th Apr 2021, 3:08 PM

reyamily

ngh...i didn't even consider traditional measurement stuff for comics. i haven't been considering it at all, really! and here i was entertaining the thought of printing out my own personal copy of the webcomic some day. lol
i'll have to keep it in mind next time to try and make it more authentic. thanks for the pointer!

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view Squirreltastic-Blue's profile

20th Apr 2021, 3:27 PM

Squirreltastic-Blue

No sweat! A quick fix is to swap the last two panels, though it might offset the pacing a little.

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view Mr.A's profile

26th Apr 2021, 1:06 AM

Mr.A

daz a big vent

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view reyamily's profile

26th Apr 2021, 11:28 AM

reyamily

at this point we'd be hard-pressed to keep calling it a vent lol

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